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From: Memet Zx <[email protected]>
To: GNU/Weeb Mailing List <[email protected]>
Cc: Ammar Faizi <[email protected]>,
	Alviro Iskandar Setiawan <[email protected]>,
	Arthur Lapz <[email protected]>, Memet Zx <[email protected]>
Subject: [Request For Review v2 1/3] perfbook-lt.tex: Fix and Improve vocabulary
Date: Wed,  8 Feb 2023 13:35:52 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <[email protected]> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <[email protected]>

In the previous patch there was an error in
using the verb "Di Edit" instead of "Diedit"
And also there is a redundant word "Tentang Itu"

Fixes:
-  Apa Yang Bisa Kamu Lakukan Tentang Itu?}
+  Apa Yang Bisa Kamu Lakukan?}

-       Di Edit Oleh: \\
+       Diedit Oleh: \\

Link:
- https://lore.gnuweeb.org/gwml/[email protected]/
- https://lore.gnuweeb.org/gwml/[email protected]/

Reviewed-by: Arthur Lapz <[email protected]>
Reviewed-by: Ammar Faizi <[email protected]>
Reviewed-by: Alviro Iskandar Setiawan <[email protected]>
Suggested-by: Ammar Faizi <[email protected]>
Suggested-by: Arthur Lapz <[email protected]>
Signed-off-by: Memet Zx <[email protected]>
---
 perfbook-lt.tex | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/perfbook-lt.tex b/perfbook-lt.tex
index 21f7d135..d09dced6 100644
--- a/perfbook-lt.tex
+++ b/perfbook-lt.tex
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@
     \IfAfourPaper{
       \usepackage[a4paper,body={6.5in,8.25in},twocolumn,columnsep=0.25in]{geometry}
     }{
-      \usepackage[letterpaper,body={6.5in,8.25in},twocolumn,columnsep=0.25in]{geometry}      
+      \usepackage[letterpaper,body={6.5in,8.25in},twocolumn,columnsep=0.25in]{geometry}
 }}}{ % One Column
   \setlength{\twocolumnwidth}{3.125in}
   \IfEbookSize {
@@ -581,9 +581,9 @@
 
 \title{
   Apakah Pemrograman Paralel Sulit, dan, Jika Ya, \\
-  Apa Yang Bisa Kamu Lakukan Tentang Itu?}
+  Apa Yang Bisa Kamu Lakukan?}
 \author{
-	Di Edit Oleh: \\
+	Diedit Oleh: \\
 	\\
 	Paul E. McKenney \\
 	Facebook \\
@@ -732,4 +732,3 @@
 % topskip: \the\topskip \\
 
 \end{document}
-
-- 
Memet Zx


  reply	other threads:[~2023-02-08  6:36 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 21+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-02-08  6:35 [Request For Review v2 0/3] Request translation review of perfbook into indonesian language Memet Zx
2023-02-08  6:35 ` Memet Zx [this message]
2023-02-08  8:54   ` [Request For Review v2 1/3] perfbook-lt.tex: Fix and Improve vocabulary Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08  9:09     ` Memet Zx
2023-02-08  9:11       ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08  9:13         ` Memet Zx
2023-02-08  9:15           ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08  9:30             ` Memet Zx
2023-02-13  5:15               ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-13  5:21                 ` Memet Zx
2023-02-13  8:18                 ` Ammar Faizi
2023-02-13 13:31                   ` Memet Zx
2023-02-08  6:35 ` [Request For Review v2 2/3] howto.tex: Fixed vocabulary mistake Memet Zx
2023-02-08  8:56   ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08  9:11     ` Memet Zx
2023-02-08 10:09       ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08 10:07   ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08  6:35 ` [Request For Review v2 3/3] intro.tex: Only half done the introductory part Memet Zx
2023-02-08  8:58 ` [Request For Review v2 0/3] Request translation review of perfbook into indonesian language Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08 10:21 ` Alviro Iskandar Setiawan
2023-02-08 10:23 ` Ammar Faizi

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