Re: [Request For Review v1 1/3] perfbook-lt.tex: change to cover to indonesian language

[Arthur Lapz <rlapz@gnuweeb.org>]

On 2/3/23 22:39, Memet Zx wrote:
> Translated cover book to indonesian language
> 
> Signed-off-by: Memet Zx <zxce3@gnuweeb.org>
> ---
>   perfbook-lt.tex | 7 ++++---
>   1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/perfbook-lt.tex b/perfbook-lt.tex
> index 13dd88b3..21f7d135 100644
> --- a/perfbook-lt.tex
> +++ b/perfbook-lt.tex
> @@ -580,10 +580,10 @@
>   \input{pfhyphex} % Hyphenation exceptions for perfbook
>   
>   \title{
> -  Is Parallel Programming Hard, And, If So, \\
> -  What Can You Do About It?}
> +  Apakah Pemrograman Paralel Sulit, dan, Jika Ya, \\
> +  Apa Yang Bisa Kamu Lakukan Tentang Itu?}
>   \author{
> -	Edited by: \\
> +	Di Edit Oleh: \\
>   	\\
>   	Paul E. McKenney \\
>   	Facebook \\
> @@ -732,3 +732,4 @@
>   % topskip: \the\topskip \\
>   
>   \end{document}
> +

 > "Paralel"
"Pararel"

 > "Apa Yang Bisa Kamu Lakukan Tentang Itu?"
"Tentang Itu?" -> redundant

My suggestion:

"Apakah Pemrograman Pararel Sulit, dan, Jika Ya, Apa Yang Bisa Kamu 
Lakukan?"

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 > "Di Edit Oleh:"

"Disunting Oleh:"


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Arthur Lapz